Tuesday, 20 August 2019
The Rotten old house
WALT: Describe a setting using creative tools to hook an audience.
What is your favourite fairy tale?
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Great sentence Hunter - you grabbed my attention. This is a habit for you now, keep it up. Would a coloured background on your DLO look better? I like the story of Hansel and Gretel, those kids must have been very annoying for their parents to dump them in the forest.
ReplyDeleteI do not have a favorite fairy tale because i don't really watch them.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you did very nice describing words and detaled words.
Did you think about doing the story i little bite longer so it makes you want to watch it.
Why did you want to write this story.
Why do you like to write about this kind of stuff.