Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 25 September 2020
Volcano Eruption
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Hi Hunter what a cool science experiment i wish i could do that with class
ReplyDeleteyou look like you had a competition i hope you won.
HI Hunter I like your science that your class did. I wish I could do it. It seems fun. I hope you won.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good job hunter and putt Capital letter on the beginning of a new sentence
ReplyDeleteHi I'm Connor from Rawhiti school you did a really great job, I wish I could do volcanoes made out of paper mache. Next time you could put in capital letters and full stops.
ReplyDeleteAnyway your work is really good